Writing Prompt – Pendant, Tea, Rabbit
I really enjoyed reading the entries from the last pinterest writing prompt we did, so I’d love to host another. This time, I’ll narrow down the choices to three. You may choose any of them. Please post your stories in the comments, or a link to your story if you write it elsewhere!
Mine
Penelope was a singularly sensible little girl. That is what all of her governesses and nannies and teachers called her, anyway. They always said it with an odd look upon their face, as if they’d just eaten something surprising and not entirely pleasant. Penelope had looked the word up in the big dictionary out on the pedestal in her mother’s library and found nothing objectionable about the descriptor at all.
She was, as it happens, delighted to know the meaning of “sensible” at this very moment, for her little brother (the one she was supposed to be watching, but who constantly crawled out of sight and ate all manner of revolting things upon the floor while she was trying to read a book) had just shoved a fistful of violets into his mouth, turned into a rabbit, and hopped into the forest.
Had she not been a particularly sensible girl, she might have disbelieved what she’d seen, and wasted precious seconds shouting about for her brother to come out of hiding.
Instead, she plucked a handful of the vivid purple violets and pressed them between the pages of her book, slipped the book into her pocket, and dashed after her brother.
Chasing a rabbit, she quickly found, did not lend itself to also paying attention to one’s surroundings. She chased his white cotton tail through a blur of greenery which morphed without her notice from scrubby pines to gnarled oak trees spilling tendrils of spanish moss.
When finally the rabbit’s panicked run came to an exhausted stop, she unpinned her bonnet and collected his long-eared form into it.
“You’ve really done it now, Edgar,” she recited to the furry bundle, using her best admonishing tone. “However am I to explain this to Mother?”
“I see you’ve found my rabbit,” said a pleasant woman’s voice.
Startled, Penelope looked up to see a lady, robed in black but beautiful, standing mere feet away. The woman smiled, teeth neat and white as doves.
“I haven’t found YOUR rabbit,” Penelope politely explained. “This is my brother.”
The woman laughed, and although her voice was still beautiful, the edges of her tone sharpened and turned brittle. She reminded Penelope of one of her governesses, the one that had been caught with silverware in her pockets.
“Don’t be ridiculous, dear girl. A rabbit for a brother? Surely you’ve simply … fallen asleep. Hand over the rabbit, and when you awaken, you will be home and this horrible ordeal will be over.”
Penelope’s eyes drooped and she stopped a yawn before it could begin. “Nonsense!” she argued, clutching her hat-entrapped brother in her arms as she scrambled to her feet. “I am not and have never been ‘ridiculous.’ I am a very sensible girl.”
The woman hissed and her dove-teeth became fangs and the lily-white skin of her hands blackened. “Give him to me, you little fool!”
“I shan’t!” cried Penelope, and stomped the hard leather heel of her boot sharply down on the woman’s foot.
The lady shrieked in surprise and pain, her voice rising more shrilly than any Penelope had ever heard, sounding more like the cats before the butler opened the windows to shout at them and throw a boot to silence them.
Abruptly, the lady was gone. Where she had stood, trapped beneath Penelope’s boot heel, lay a large brassy pendant on a chain. Penelope reached down and noted that the pendant had some kind of fish upon its face. She was still peering quizzically at it when another voice spoke up.
“Well, now you’ve done it, yes you have, and you not even a clue as to what you’ve begun.”
Warily, Penelope looked around, but could not find the speaker. An acorn flew down from a tree overhead and struck her upon the temple. “Up here!”
A dashing red squirrel with quite the most impressive tail she had ever seen scowled down at her.
“Pardon me,” she said, dipping into a curtsy. “I am unaccustomed to being addressed by wildlife.”
The squirrel flipped his tail twice and twitched his nose at her before finally settling down. “That is much better. You would be surprised at how many adventurers don’t know the first thing about manners!”
“Oh, I’m no adventurer. I’m just a girl.” Penelope looked down to her brother and frowned. “A girl having a very unusual afternoon.”
The squirrel laughed, black eyes sparkling. “Ah, dear girl, that is precisely how adventurers are made.”


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CUTE!
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that was wonderful! are you going to continue?
Probably not. I have so many story ideas, and that one’s not even got a plot to it. Just a fun twiddle from an image prompt. <3
The old man sits alone in a corner of the Lotus tea house.
He looks worn and tired. It’s clear to anyone with eyes to see that he ain’t got much time left in the world.
It’s said in the Deadlands that the gods were dead, killed by man and his obsession with making the world make sense. When a man can create his own light, why would he need the gods to show him the way? It’s said that when man turned his face away from the gods, the gods withered away, leaving nothing behind but a vacuum that man tried to fill with his endless lust for technology and power.
But it’s clear to anyone that walks through the silver gates of the Lotus that the gods didn’t die. They just left us to our own devices.
Even in a land dry of faith though, the gods are merciful. At the very tip top of mount Kybermost, they left behind some of their grace, a last bastion of light and faith against the darkness they’d fled from.
The scent of ambrosia and myrrh is the first thing that hits you when you walk in. Then the tea-maidens zero in on ya.
Walkin’ a fine line between the divine and the ephemeral, they’re a vision to behold. Picture the most beautiful woman in the world combined with the perfect sunset or a view into the pristine depths of endless glacial ice and you might find yourself possessed of a vision that holds a candle to what the tea-maidens look like.
Many of the folks that survive the month long climb to get to the Lotus end up never leaving. They stay here, content to relax in the bosom of the gods till Judgement day.
Some leave though. Them that have a darkness eatin’ at the corner of their hearts can’t bear to stay in the light for any decent length of time.
You see, it’s only when they’re in the light that they see how hollow they’ve become.
But they leave the Lotus bearing tales. Tales of wonder and faith. Tales of majesty and light.
Tales of the Tears of Lyss.
That’s why the old man is here, sittin’ alone in the corner of the Lotus, staring down into his cup.
I ain’t sitting next to him but I know what he’s drinkin’. Man with that breed of look on his face only heads to the Lotus to one thing.
The Tears of Lyss is a flower, grown in the soil of the Maker and watered by the tears of Lyss, the two-faced goddess of thought and memory.
Down a cup infused with one of the Tears and you get to remember the happiest memory you’ve ever had, the kind of memory that gets your insides all warm and blows out the bottom of your mind.
Drink up with two Tears and you deal with the saddest memory of your life, with the kind of clarity that cuts through your mind like a cold winter wind.
Three and you’ll regain every memory of the truest love you’ve had. Memories so clear that you’ll be able to taste her skin and feel the silk curtain of her hair sliding under your hand.
Four and you’ll forget her, so completely that it’ll be as if you’ve never loved at all.
Thing is, I’ve never seen anyone go past four. Far as I know, nobody ever has. It’s beyond me to wonder as to why a man might need eleven of the suckers in his drink.
And it ain’t my place to speculate.
People from the Deadlands might find it a mite strange that we don’t even think to wonder, but that’s only because they’ve never been to the Lotus.
Round here, everyone’s got their reasons and their own stories to tell.
S’far as I’m concerned, a man’s got enough to handle with his own problems without shouldering someone else’s load.
Still…
Eleven Tears of Lyss.
A man can’t help but wonder.
Wow, that’s fantastic! I totally read it in the voice of the Bastion narrator, too. Very poignant. Great ending.
The treasures continue to shower upon us: First, Perry’s riff on Paladin Gerard; now, this delightful little fantasy. I’m going to share it with Alie and get her reaction.
Oh, and…you’re a tease, yes you are! <3
*laugh* You KNOW I can’t help myself. Writing full stories in miniature form is an art that I do not possess. <3
Yesterday I read both those little gems and then fell asleep thinking about what I might write…I ended up having the wildest dream with all these interlocking stories…Penelope made an appearance (although I think for some reason her name was Victoria is my dream) and so did the Tears of Lyss, along with wizards, elves, competing apprentices, desert kingdoms, imprisoned royalty, and a case of mistaken identity. It was an interesting night.
Wow, that sounds fantastic! Love it when I get fun story dreams!
That sounds like a lovely dream ^^
It was :)
Mine was a bit long so I posted it on my blog.
http://thegreatnoveladventure.blogspot.com/2012/12/a-morsel-pendant-tea-rabbit.html
Faith, that was wonderful! Thanks so much for sharing. :-D
I commented on the original blog as well, but holy cow, anyone who is even a little interested totally needs to go read it! SO good!
http://thegreatnoveladventure.blogspot.com/2012/12/a-morsel-pendant-tea-rabbit.html
Very very much <3.
I commented there too but I luuuuurved the moment she walks in and sees all the candlelight and flower heads in buckets =D
Oh my…thank you all! <3
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Mine got a little long as well (about 950 words) so I posted it to my blog.
http://tedthethird.com/writing-prompt-pendant-tea-and-rabbit/